Rewrites:
How many rewrites does it take to make a book? I’ll let you
know when it’s finished… maybe.
Because I’d have to count the number of times I save new
changes, not just the number of new starts and new versions of the story; a
little tweak here, a name change there… Probably the hardest part is knowing
when to stop, because it can feel as if a story is never perfect, and something
could always be added or taken away, or told from a different viewpoint… unless
of course there is that eureka moment when everything slots into place, the
characters saying just the right thing, at just the right moment, with
illustrations working in perfect harmony. Sometimes words have to compromise,
keeping quiet while pictures have their say, because in a picture book some of
the story is told by the pictures.
Anyway, I’m currently working on a rewrite of my work in
progress, making sure I’m showing not telling, without getting too many words
to squeeze into a picture book. And because it’s a picture book, I’m also working
on the illustrations, filling up sketchbooks and playing with paint. The
characters are causing me more than a few problems because some of them are
more of a concept than an actual being… and no, I’m not going to explain that
at this point, you’ll just have to wait and see.
Of course as well as working on rewrites, I’m also creating
content for my website, which often feels like writing into the abyss! There
must be so many words bobbing about the internet at this point, that it’s a
wonder they don’t all stick together and start making up their own stories,
like a giant imagination.
So I’m going to head off now to have a chat with the
characters of the book, see if we can come to some sort of an agreement about
building this book, so that we can finally get it over the finish line.